I liked it, its got alot of raw emotions in it

Yea, such a good poem keep it up 5/5

Wow lots of emotion in this poem. good work.

-steph

Gr8 poem. strong in emotions. got a good flow. i like the ending. keep writing:)

I wish you would have explained a little more HOW exactly you caused this death but other than that it was really good. Keep it up!
~Jules