Mirage of Trust.

by Sophie   Sep 13, 2006


Your lies are like flames
That burn deep in my soul.
Your deceitful eyes
Are slowly taking their toll.

A smile to my face,
A glare to my back.
The rumors you told.
Your friendship was slack.

You knew it was wrong
It would cause a fight.
That stab in the back
Did not feel right

I can not believe your words,
Or the things that you say.
This feeling of betrayal,
Will not go away.

* Thanks Jessy for giving me some pointers*

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  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Great poem. thoroughly enjoyed it...i agree with jessy. but overall great job!Jpoet*

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh.. You okay hunny? We're all here for you okay? This was great! The emotion was clear and strong, and I loved the words you used! Some of your flow was a little off but you can fix that by adding a word or taking one out here or there.. For example :

    Are taking their toll.
    ^ Maybe you could add in "slowly" before "taking" to make it flow better..

    Nicely done sweetie! 5/5

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