Some very good advice and deep meaning in this poem.

Another great poem by a great poet, and a 5/5 from me.

Good work bhai
well done
5/5
plz read my poems if free

This is fantastic- the voice, style, flow and form are fantastic. The repitition of Sometimes works wonderfully and you really have captured so much of life in this work.
And you asked me for my advice and guidance? Trust me, you don't need it (but as always it will be a joy to read your work and offer whatever opinions or advice I can. There are a few minor things that could perhaps make this piece stronger, but it is perfectly fine as it is (I'm still editing/doing rewrites on poems I wrote years ago-so I know that with time comes perspective and an ability to edit/rewrite/improve new writings as well as older poems, we all can always strive to improve)), you have the talent, the ability, the heart and mind and soul of a true poet!

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka