The shadow of my mistakes

by Michael D Nalley   Sep 13, 2006


Dark is the night, as light is the day
I spend half my life turning away
Naturally revolution is what it takes
To escape the shadow of my mistakes

Dark is the night as truth is the light
Blind is my sight in the dark of the night
Life guides me toward celestial perfection
Love forgives me with heavenly affection

Lessons are learned, yet truth is not earned
Passions persuade my soul to be burned
Seeking salvation for heaven\'s sakes
Far from the shadow of my mistakes

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  • 18 years ago

    by jello

    This is beautiful.
    really good wording
    i love it
    good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Kate Kayuda

    I love how the rhyming really flows with context of the poem. Also the lexis used is very nice flowing and calm.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melanie

    This is a very good poem I wish I can write them like that

  • 18 years ago

    by Zach Buenger

    Wow really loved this! great rythem and it flowed very nicely 5/5 good job keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by John (Mr. Whuppy)

    You write in the same sort of vein as me Only better No IM NOT JEALOUS lol
    terrific poem loved the flow
    had to vote and give it 5 even though it puts your poem above mine in the top poems of this catagory
    but im only on for the comments votes can be fixed and comments can help you rectify

    peace
    John

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