All Wrong...

by The Black Rose   Sep 13, 2006


Everthing i know,
everything i've ever done
i take one last bow,
then i'll be gone
gone forever,
to be never seen again
i can't live together
afraid for fights and despair
afraid, for the last breath of air
afraid to loose the one i love
afraid for the smallest dove...
what can i do,
to make my life whole again
but there is no answer...
because she's the one i love
and she's too far away
away from my life
away from me...
I miss her...
-xxx-

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  • 18 years ago

    by Keath

    Very nicely written, very strong and very touchy. There are many emotions in it and they are well expressed.
    Keep on writing please.

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Wow there was a lot of emotions in this poem and they were sad...but the poem was very cool and I was touched.

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlyn

    Very good... I liked it alot and I really hope you keep wrting because I'll look out for it... 5/5

    Sincerely,
    Katlyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlyn

    Very good... I liked it alot and I really hope you keep wrting because I'll look out for it... 5/5

    Sincerely,
    Katlyn

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