Hmm... I thought this was kind of cool. It seemed more like an oath than a poem. I think you should put it in the dark poems section though... it doesn't seem to be about depression.
Can't wait to see more from you :)

I personally think that's the wrong action to take. but i think it made sense. nice poem...

It was more of a dark thought then a action.
just something that i made up when i was bored. and ty