Your over me
by tae Mar 11, 2004
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It took u all of 2 minutes to get over me,seems like u couldn't wait to get your belongings and be free,while i cry myself into a dream your out having fun, while i fall asleep always alone your probably with someone,out of the 9 years we've been 2gether its like your happiest days are now, making it seem as though your life is beginning and my life has ended somehow,cant u see that i need u 2 miss me or at least show that your hurting 2,cant u see i want your heart to not beat without me because mines won't beat without u,but now i see you meant what u said about you being o.k,and while i wake up with u being the 1st thought in my head, u just wake up 2 another day,and time and time again i scold myself over the fact that my memories just wont let me be,and even though it will take me a lifetime 2 get over u, it took u all of 2 minutes 2 get over me. |
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20 years ago
I really liked this one, too, Tae.
If I might offer a suggestion.... I think it would flow better if you separated your lines more clearly. You don't want your reader to have to search for the rhyme scheme or labor over getting the meter right.
It is a very VERY good, poem though... it really says a lot.. and is packed full of emotion! can't wait to see more from you!
