very very good, Tae.... very well written... you captured that emotion so well... and of course you left us with such a perfect obvious ending to the scenario... A heart with a lock on it... <APPLAUSE>

I feel you on that shyt i got a poem its called Missing piece read it but your poem is how i feel about the love of my life that cheated on me 6 times and even slept with my sister!!! TeAyA