by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG Sep 13, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
-At The Gate.- |
"Another summer has already come and gone." |
by Lovely Bones
I love the descriptions in this poem. "Love alive in his eyes". Wow. I think it's wonderful hun, keep it up! |
Wonderful poem...u have serious talent..i am bulimic and a (struggling day after day to get n stay clean) meth addict n my poems are about my addictions and self destructive tendencies...pretty deep stuff n if u would read and comment on sum of my stuff i would appreciate it. |
Not as good as the other one, definately, but I did like it. It held a lot of emotion, but I felt you could have put more imagery into it. Grand job, though. |