Not as good as the other one, definately, but I did like it. It held a lot of emotion, but I felt you could have put more imagery into it. Grand job, though.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Wonderful poem...u have serious talent..i am bulimic and a (struggling day after day to get n stay clean) meth addict n my poems are about my addictions and self destructive tendencies...pretty deep stuff n if u would read and comment on sum of my stuff i would appreciate it.

princess of self-detruction
aka brittany

I love the descriptions in this poem. "Love alive in his eyes". Wow. I think it's wonderful hun, keep it up!

"Another summer has already come and gone."
He muttered under his breath at the edge of the pond,
As the sun slowly drifted along the top of the hills,
He sat shuttering from early falls chills.

This was a trully perfect stanza. Absolutely loved it. The flow and imagery was wonderful. The whole poem was so well written.

Thanks for entering it in my contest. Loved reading it.