Veils of Smiles and Hate

by Sondos   Sep 13, 2006


Sensuous laughter under the daisy-tree-plant
Stickily turning in fire
Lets blink to the light and wink at the night
I'll roast in this funeral pyre

And if you twist me and turn me
And dance in billows of smoke
I'll stone the evil in you at a later date
For penniless grieving
Can be very deceiving
Beneath veils of smiles and hate

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  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This is one of the best poems ive ever read it was absolutely amazing, i love it so much!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is a great poem.I love the rhyme scheme and the flow and metaphor and emotion.Very impressive.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary jurechka

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    This is too good. Really an exellent, cool write. The flow was great and just the rhyming-it was spot on. Loved the imagery which was an intense play with words. Overall this is simply exceptional. I loved the way that it formed images that were vivid. Great write.
    ~Faith-less

  • 18 years ago

    by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-

    Hey, great poem!
    it rhymes really well,
    i like your post in the discussion, so i thought i come and comment! Your really funny! lol
    Love MEl

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    You are very talented, you know what you are writing, that is why you are just so great. 5/5

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