As snow does to a fire
((I don't like these lines..))

My god, you're amazing... I loved this poem as well! I'm speechless to your poems, and usually I have a lot to say. The way you write is simply amazing, espically if you're really 14. The use of vocabulary is phenominal and the describing ways you have are...just wow. Excellent job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Wow, i read this three times as i really like it, another 5/5 for you

I love it. The flow was perfect, the descriptions were strong and the whole theme was well-thought out. Keep it up

Good choice of words combined with great imaginery..just great..
Keep up the good work!

God bless!

Hey great poem, i like you rhyming, it really flow and fits in perfectly!
love mel

Very creative, very thoughtfull. I love it.

Wonderful piece!!!

This poem is based around the Genesis Story and the desire for perfection. I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it :)

I liked the imagery you had used in this one as well. But, I did get a little confused. But, overall, it was really well written and I enjoyed reading it. 5/5 =]]

-Jenna.