I really like the ideas and images in this poem, representing love almost by a war. i undertand how u feel and have felt the same things, i think it gets better :) xx

Hey! I loved this poem.. It was AWESOME!!! And I really felt like I could relate!! Good Work! Check out my poems sometime! THNKS!
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This poem as so many great points about it. It even ends in good-bye.