Haiku

Just like you to say so much in such few words. I can never tell you how much I admire your work.

Love
shobhana

Enticing haiku. I love the form because it allows you to create wonderful images and concepts in so few words/lines. This was a beautiful write, and quite enjoyable. Oh and thanks for the comment on my "manager" poem, I'm glad you liked it sweetie.
Take care.

Nicely done!!!

Hey, really short and i cant really find any hidden messsage, but i like, it not to complex so it doesnt make me think to hard. lol
love mel

Wonderful.. im not fond of haikus but this i actually liked this one.. haha keep up the good work! even if there were only 3 lines.. there was so much imagery.. great job!

~angel~