Not confusing at all, doll. I reallly liked it.. Rather sad. I'm not really sure what to say, for once, so forgive me. It was a powerful poem, though a bit too much of pronouns for me. Nonetheless, it was great.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

A very Twisting and Turing kind of poem. even with the information on the bottom i found my self thinking and contemplating what this was about., to me it seemed like she 'killed' him., whether actual murder or she cheated on him and he dies soon after. and she feels responsible. i like how i got to imagine. some poems basicly spell everything out for you, this one makes you wonder, and i like it, (i like the other ones too) but i felt like i was walking ne\xt to the woman and could feel her fear and emotions. this was very well written.

5|5

xxLauren