A Message Of Hope

by nobody truly knows me   Sep 13, 2006


Happiness,
tranquility,
joy,
serenity,
all consumed by darkness,
sucked into an empty void.
replaced by confusion,
fear,
chaos,
despair,
hopelessness fill all thoughts.
until, out of nowhere,
a ray of light,
shining from above,
a message of hope from heaven,
shining brilliantly with love.

~*~anybody see any patterns? i'm curious to see if any body catches it. plus, i'm not sure which category to place it under, any suggestions?~*~

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    I don't know anything of the diffrent poetry types and structure. This is a beautifully written poem. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Seeing as its ur bday i will comment 3 poems:) anyway, this was really good. i liked the use of wording. it just was really good. keep it up..the only pattern i can get is that some words rhyme...lol

  • 18 years ago

    by XxxXLoveless_WristsXxxX

    I don't know what type it is...but I do know that it is really well written and that you have a real talent for writing...
    Keep it up..
    Love
    XxxXLysetteXxxX

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristina

    Great poem. you did a wonderful job on it. it's short but great. flowed nicely too. keep it up! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is a nice poem! love how you used your words, and love the style of it! keep it up!

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