This is really good..thanxs for the comment on my poem..xoxo

Angel!!!!!!!!!!
Wow! u should keep writing more!
and all you said is true.....life doesn't offer the "thing" we want to everyone...some are lucky and some are not...but no matter what we always feel the the weight is on us...and us alone..but don't worry maybe..just maybe we will find it one day..
well it was a great write!
so keep it up. keep saying whats in ur heart
and dont let anyone bring you down ok!
Your buddy!
♥Desari♥

Flick good one look real close at these lines(Life is full of pain and lies.) u learn to live life and love it for what u have.

Not bad at all! I can never come up with something so good off the top of my head. It said everything you wanted it to and it sounded just brilliant. Great job!