Hey...My name is Jasmine and I just joined this site yester!! Anyways enough about me I really Like your poem because I'm dealing with this situation myself where I'm in LOVE with this white boy but I'm black...SO yea go n check out my poem n tell me what u think!!

I was wondering about this. I think you could use more somthing I can't put my finger on it. I mean all races have their problems and historys I was raised in alaska where being part white is a sin in a village. I am 1/4 native and look white. I was the one picked on when i wasent being beat up.

I love your poem and your style

The subject matter is obviously important to you and thats what brings the feelings out

I wont enter into arguments on religion/race/or politics But each to his own opinion

Welcome to P&Q and please keep writing

For guidance in youth see my poem

Old Mans advice

Once again well done i give it 5/5

Dang girlim so jelous your way more talented than me!! And its so very true.
I hope we could be extra good freinds cuz all your poems decribe how i feel!!

mi amor para ti
abby*

Dang girl...for 13 ur good
keep it up! 5/5 i liked it
:)
shortie