by Brooke Mason Sep 13, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
So I was sitting here |
by Mr M
You poems would be so much better if they did not see only death as the alternative. This too was well written. |
Im not commenting the poem its just the only way i can think of contecting you at the moment....i didnt use conjunction becaue that would be misused...i said your love...as in possesion...you're would have been misused....because it would be you are love...and that wouldnt make sence...just needed to point that out...lol |
by Aussie
Wow so emotional:) |