by Wasted Fake Smiles Sep 13, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The long walk of shame, all alone, |
by emmerz
I think in one of the last lines it should be 'no longER be'.... but i really liked how you ended this! all uplifting in the very last line..clever:) great job as always |
by Mommy And Me
Wow deep. depressing. but really good |
by donna
Another wonderful poem, the rhythm is excellent and I love the way You have a hopeful ending to a sad poem :] 5/5 xx |
This was really a good poem. |