This was really a good poem.

The flow was good and the overall write was done exceptionly well. Very original. Hadn't thought of this subject when I was making the list. A nice surprise.

Thanks for entering the contest and congratulations.

Another wonderful poem, the rhythm is excellent and I love the way You have a hopeful ending to a sad poem :] 5/5 xx

Wow deep. depressing. but really good

I think in one of the last lines it should be 'no longER be'.... but i really liked how you ended this! all uplifting in the very last line..clever:) great job as always