by shaquana Sep 13, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
new love
I NEVER KNEW I HAD A HEART THAT WAS LOVE...I WAS TOO BUSY BEING LOW LIKE IF I WAS A BROKEN DOVE |
I also agree with Jennifer. That is a beautiful start to a poem. If you added some more stanzas it would be magnificent. Thanks for cutting the caps =) |
That's a good start. You could make that into a nice poem.. instead of one stanza.. you know. Good luck and nice work. |