by FallenAngel Sep 14, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Underneath my skin, i felt cold inside |
by Jenni Marie
I love the ending line you used...I thought that it added to the effect of the poem and it was very intense... |
Hey i really like the way that you write ur poetry. theres lots of agghh..mm..darkness, babe. |
This is a good poem also, but i will give you4/5 but i still LOVED IT never mind i changed my mind, i am gonna give ya 5/5 hehe, cuz it is a masterpiece...hehehehe |
One amazing poem, i think its perfect and so sweet in a sense. Keep up the good work mate! |