Comments : You & I

  • 18 years ago

    by Daz Mellow

    Please rate and comment on how I can improve this poem. Thx

  • 17 years ago

    by yvonne

    Thats tight !!

  • 17 years ago

    by Rahl The Layman Lord

    Nice poem, other than a bit of flow problem I like it. Congrats on what you have.

    -Lord Rahl-

  • 17 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Keep on keeping on. You are #1.

  • 16 years ago

    by Laurenf7

    Great poem 5/5