Drowning Voices

by Phantasmagoria   Sep 14, 2006


A torrent breaks in
diffused with cold
the air grows thin
with what I've been told
and it runs together
mixing the blood with hurt
we walk with regret,
fearful and curt
there are drowning voices
in my head
now I am someone else
[another one dead]
I am those voices
down in the grave
no life is no hope
and is nothing to save
stop thinking this is gone
these voices won't die
don't pray anymore
when you look to the sky
bring instead a new way
cut out a tampered heart
this is a becoming
that's tearing us apart
I have something to tell
[but the drowning has muted me]
rats are pouring out instead
and I cannot stop to flee...

INSPIRED BY BTK BIND TORTURE KILL

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  • 18 years ago

    by druane

    I really like it its awsome, its like alive or something i love it

  • 18 years ago

    by Leslie

    This is good, i can feel the power in your words, they're well chosen. My only thing is no punctuation and/or spacing. ahh, i dont want to critique because in my heart i really feel this poem. I just think the physical apperence of the poem could be made stronger. your words need spacing and work to back them up and make them real