The Champagne Bottle

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Sep 14, 2006


The Champagne Bottle

A rose on the table.
To witness the betrayal,
Of two lovers crossed
As the night was lost.

Beginning my tale
Is a love that failed.
A tale so wrong,
The insanity did prolong.

A bottle of champagne,
Lain where it's lain,
Holds on tight
To a secret that night.

Look closely to see
What this champagne comes to be.
No longer champagne,
But a new secret ingrained.

Tampered with and stolen,
Is this secret so golden.
The champagne on the table,
Tells of his betrayal.

Poison on the glass, trickling down -
As her death was sadly found.
'You deserve much better than me,
Baby, don't you see?'

Eyes closed against the pain;
The lies in that bottle of champagne.
'You deserve better than this place,
Your beauty is too much to waste.'

'My secret is finally out;
There is no final doubt,
Too perfect is true
That's why I killed you.'

A rose on this table.
To witness the betrayal
Of two lovers crossed,
As the night was lost.

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Understanding: In case you didn't understand ((for it had the hidden meaning)) that the man thought his lover was too perfect for the world, that she deserved much better; to not live in this world. So, he killed her, so she could 'have better'. When he spoke of her beauty, he was saying her beauty was like an angel and that's what she deserved to be.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    The first stanza was my favorite in a very beautiful poem. The flow and rhythm was great as well as the content. Very sad poem, this was.

    Thanks for entering my contest.

  • 18 years ago

    by DepthofPassion

    It was a beautifully written and thought out poem...I thought meaning was clever.

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Very deep Shin! I loved this one. The emotion, heart and flow was amazing! Nice work, truly.

  • 18 years ago

    by Faye

    This poem is amazing. no other words to explain it. beause the way you have explained it is perfect. Your an amazing poet.
    Look at some of mine if you want.
    Faye

  • 18 years ago

    by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX

    Another amazing poem u have a true gift