One Last Cry

Its very nicely put. It makes me wonder if there is more of a story with it.

Wow that was amazing writting in just a few lines, very good work...
Karms.

4/5 I didnt understand this one! But great writing!

I like this one. As a matter of fact, I think it's my favorite one by you. I'm not a big fan of cinquains, but you really took this and made something great out of it. The last line really pulled the poem together and gave it a nice sad effect. But you did a really good job on this! 5/5

Not 2 bad, itz very good 5/5