Wow, a great one with deep emotion. you have made your point so nicely, 5/5

In a few words you clearly portrayed pain and beauty. Wonderful, deep work.

Wow, amazing. Short, yet you got what you where writing about across. It was very good.

Oh wow... So simple yet so perfect! I absolutely -loved- this one! Nothing more to say.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

A true poet can take any words and make then beautiful, you demistrated that ability here. Nice job.

-Tainted Miko

Hmmm.."one last cry" i was surprise when i open and read this poem, it short but i t hink it express something different good job misstress mabuhay ka ingat!

Very short ... but very powerful

luv *~Smile_Full_Of_Lies~*

I loved loved this. for being so short it said so much. I love poems in different writing styles this was amazingly perfect. great job!

Wow dude great job i cant stop thinking why this one has a low vote this is great poem and you too have a talented and you can put your emotions on papers and i wonder if you can speak tagalog lols

Geneross

Simple and meaningful. It a rare thing for so few words to mean as much.

This poem is short yet so powerful! It takes great talent to be able to write such a short poem with such emotion.

Keep it up x x x

This one was very good. I liked the flow and depth. Nice work, truly.

I liked this, it was short, precise, straight to the point.

Not 2 bad, itz very good 5/5

I like this one. As a matter of fact, I think it's my favorite one by you. I'm not a big fan of cinquains, but you really took this and made something great out of it. The last line really pulled the poem together and gave it a nice sad effect. But you did a really good job on this! 5/5

4/5 I didnt understand this one! But great writing!

Wow that was amazing writting in just a few lines, very good work...
Karms.

Its very nicely put. It makes me wonder if there is more of a story with it.