This is a captivating dark poem very skillfully written

Wow noni, this one was so great but sad emotions, you have proven that u r the best once again.i really like this one, great job like always
another 5/5 from me.

Great poem, tonnes of emotions all the way through!
well done!
love mel

Great poem. i loved it. you put a lot of emotion into it. you have to remain strong. i know i can relate. i have to manage so many things at once but like you say i don't like to quit. just stay strong...

Excellent poem! I could relate to this one very well, I like you have so much burden on my shoulder, but still I refuse to quit. It is a good thing, it makes us winners in a way. I love your determination. Wonderful write, keep it up!

Excellence....5/5...I love the words you have chose it painted images in my head

Your words...are amazing...you have a wonderful gift...to capture you emtions..turn them into...words!

Again, another 5/5