That poem was relli good! Gret work, this poem had a nice flow to it!

Very good poem

Great job with this poem and great words loved it i gave u 5/5 keep it up

YOU JUST WON YOURSELF A NEW FAN!!!!
Good Good work!!!
i saw all that you described in my head
keep up the good work
5/5 from me

YOU JUST WON YOURSELF A NEW FAN!!!!
Good Good work!!!
i saw all that you described in my head
keep up the good work
5/5 from me

W-o-w. Lol. There was just...so much emotion. It was terrific. Excellent. Ecstatic. Fabulous! Lol. Definately keep it up! PLEASE! You are a great writer and you can definately write with emotion. Loads of it. =P I loved this poem mainly because it rhymed, it flowed excellently, and had a lot of emotion in it. A great talent. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

WOW great poem. really good. lots of raw emotion. excellent read. love it. love willow xxoo