A World Away (Teenage Romance)

by BrokenMisery   Sep 14, 2006


Black, white and grey
Its another world away
(from my heart)

Play the game of romance
A flower on the street
It's the innocent heart
For the crow, that's sweet.

Rustic petals breaking in the wind
(whispering) He loves me, he loves me not.

*for my art assignment

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  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    I'm sure you're get a A. It was short but very elegantly written. Keep it up. You deserve a higher rating.

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Well, hey, it's not your best, but I did like it... It said a lot in a little bit. I don't care what others say, I simply liked it. Why? I'm not really sure. =]

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by BeLLa

    I really like this,
    It is different to normal ones except i can feel it..i dunno it is wierd what i feel but it got to me..I LOVE IT!! 5/5 good job

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