Very nice.. Aside from a few spelling errors it was well written . also, i do thin kit needs to be broken up in to stanzas or one long freeverse, but this is just my opinoin, as is., with the mistakes it is still 5/5 quality, keep up the good work , you have a talent for writing.

x.x:Lauren

5/5 such powerful emotion in this one. ur a great writer. keep writing

Great. Even though it didn't rhyme much it still felt like a poem. It was a good poem.

GREAT

This poem makes me wanna cry....great job

This one reminds me of a dear friend to my heart.