Comments : Lonely

  • 18 years ago

    by Lizem

    I feel the same way. Pretty good way to exprese yourself

  • 18 years ago

    by Tortured Soul

    I like ths poem. i can so relate. i know exactly how all that feels. im goin through that now. keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brisa

    Nice work. i liked it. keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Yeah.. All the time.

    Great poem. it ws full of rawr emotion and the way it was written was simple yet advanced, it could use some breaks to differenciate the lines and whatnot but otherwise it made ma angry and idk, it had emotion. although more of a rant it was good.

    5|5

    xx.Lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by Christie

    Omgosh, this is beautifully written and worded, i love it.i can completely relate to this. 5/5 and three thumbs up, this was clearly written from the heart.
    keep writing, u have such potential and talent. =)
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Tenisha

    Great work i feklt ur emotions good job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    This one is nice too.

    Tip: Maybe if you had them in short sentences or something.

    Apart from that I liked it.

    Good.

    N-G-C-S.