Relapse

by argueing with the rain   Sep 14, 2006


Another relapse. stumbling back into the void. nothing has changed. same home, sweet home. dancing with demons. waltzing off to war. defenseless i stand. no weapon in my hand. here on principle, reporting to the firring squad. smoke my last cigarette.my final earthly delight.accepting my punishment. i no longer fear.

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  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    This one is nice.
    I don't think it's as nice as the others.
    But it's good.
    I still gave a 5.

    Take Care,
    N-G-C-S.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    This poem could use some work, its a lil choppy and definantly needs breaks. but it has a nice(sad) theme and you can tell wasnt written in 3 secs flat while you were drunk. =]

    x.x.Lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by Brisa

    It could use some work but i liked it.

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