It could use some work but i liked it.

This poem could use some work, its a lil choppy and definantly needs breaks. but it has a nice(sad) theme and you can tell wasnt written in 3 secs flat while you were drunk. =]

x.x.Lauren

This one is nice.
I don't think it's as nice as the others.
But it's good.
I still gave a 5.

Take Care,
N-G-C-S.