Troubled Child

by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-   Sep 14, 2006


Beating heart bellow her skin
But feeling sweet sorrow deep within
Broken, burnt and left behind
Feeling the pain she can not find

Scars will not leave, though slowly fade
Thoughts of the games the girl had played
Left to finish her life alone
Into her heart, sharp blades were sewn

Love was a fairytale, it never came true
Those happy moments, became fewer than few
Left alone her heart was to find
Happiness of a different kind

Loving her self was so hard to do
Looking at the mirror, she could'nt see what was true
Her bones were protruding, under baggy clothes
Inside her hate, herself she loathes

Feeling alone, with no-one to care
A young girls life broken, unfair
She was alone the day she died
Because nobody cared for the tears she cried

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  • 16 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Soo powerfull. Really. I can relate too. Its just amazing, and so so real. Nice write. keep it up. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by EtErNaLlY cOnFuSeD

    That one reallly touched me. alot. im so sorry if u have had or r goin through feelings like that. i have b4, and that was a really good, just really good poem. haha made me tear up more than the last one. lol

  • 17 years ago

    by PoetryHeart

    Wow. that was absolutly beautiful and touching. you are now officially my favorite author and i love your poems. my favorite part was "Love was a fairytale, it never came true
    Those happy moments, became fewer than few
    Left alone her heart was to find
    Happiness of a different kind" i can really relate to it, which is sad, but beautiful write. 10/10!

  • 18 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    +.+ Self-hate is becoming so often. It really makes me feel sad. :'(. It's an awsum poem. Lol. 5/5. P.S That poem AbOrTiOn WaS hEr AnSwEr, wasn't about me. It was for all the girls who go through that experience. +.+

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Oh me gee! ^_^ This reminds me of me -gulps-. I got the impression that this girl was anarexic or bulemic, but you may have aimed for something else. I'm not 100% sure lol.

    The rhymes were waay cliche. They didn't seem like they were very original to me. The flow wasn't all that good either. It seemed as if you were trying to rhyme rather than trying to write a poem. Poems don't always have to rhyme. It's the emotion and structure thought up that makes each one unique.

    Speaking of emotion, that's what I really liked in this poem. There was a lot of raw emotion, and I can totally relate 100%. If you ever need someone to talk to, I'll be here. I love getting mail anyways. ^_^ Even hate mail for that matter lol. Well done. =) 4/5 xoxo

    Samantha

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