I really like this powm as i can relate...i wish for all the same things...this is so well writen keep up the good work 5/5
xoxoxxo

I love it. its really sad,... but amazing. i can relate to this also. u have so much talent niquee.. i hope u r ok... cuz u seem like such an amazing person... so keep ur head up high
take care
luve angie

Very beautiful, but very sad. one day all this pain will be gone. you'll look back and remember how you stayed strong, how you wrote your feelings down as a release, and how you kept going through everything. great poem too. i love it.
love willow xxoo