Comments : The hidden killer

  • 18 years ago

    by Georgia

    Hey lovely poem xoxoxoxox 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    I loved the line "how can one fly with broken wings" very good. I heart it.

    LUVS

    KatieBug

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelly

    Love comes with one guarantee
    you end as screw up as me.

    i love this line - it sums up your feelings in the poem perfectly. I have at times felt like this. I never did understand "its better to have love and lost than never loved at all" You cant miss something you never had.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Raechel

    You certainly got your point across and its SO TRUE! Well written I realy enjoyed it and can relate

  • 17 years ago

    by Hear You Me

    That is so true. love sucks, but its better to have loved and lost, right? i like the way you actually got all those little sayings to rhyme!!

    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    I certainly enjoyed it. Love does hurt. Very good poem. I liked it 100%. 5/5 from me.
    Evil Penguin