by Samantha Sep 14, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Look into my eyes now and baby you will see |
by Kristy
I liked your poem short and sweet. 5 all the way =) |
by Samantha
I liked this poem, however i think that there can be more to it. the ideas behind it are very well thought out but i think you can add more detail. theres also a few punctuation errors. you could even maybe seperate a few of the lines so it makes it easier to read. other than that it was very cute. keep up the good work! 4/5 |