Each And Every Kiss

by Samantha   Sep 14, 2006


Look into my eyes now and baby you will see
Everything you do means everything to me
When you hold me close my eyes are shining bright
They shimmer like the stars on a cloudless summer night
And when you hold my hand I feel like I'm secure
The spaces between my fingers are filled with a thinig so sweet and pure
I"ve never felt something that feels as right as this
The rockets keep on firing with each and every kiss

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kristy

    I liked your poem short and sweet. 5 all the way =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    I liked this poem, however i think that there can be more to it. the ideas behind it are very well thought out but i think you can add more detail. theres also a few punctuation errors. you could even maybe seperate a few of the lines so it makes it easier to read. other than that it was very cute. keep up the good work! 4/5