Bleeding Crimson Rain

by Midnight Sun   Sep 14, 2006


The moon herself screams in agony
The stars cry for my pain
Mother earth holds me close
As the sky bleeds a crimson rain

My tears shatter on the ground
And the icy liquid freezes over
My own spirit leaves my soul
So I hide under this devilish cover

Darkness envelops my heart
Like a vine grasping a tree
Its burning fingers with such a hold
Pull me under the surface of the sea

The moon herself screams in agony
The stars cry for my pain
Mother earth holds me close
As the sky bleeds a crimson rain

I can't pull myself back up
I've been down much too long
I can't fight alone anymore
Its grip is much too strong

But I've lived in solitude all my life
I've been long forgotten
Now the only one to witness my death
Is this sphere so long ago begotten

The moon herself screams in agony
The stars cry for my pain
Mother earth holds me close
As the sky bleeds a crimson rain

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  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    WOW!!! im speechless this is beyond beautiful. very very amazing... 6/5

  • 17 years ago

    by NeferNoir

    The depth of imagination you portray in this poem is more than amazing... I really like the flow of words and the description in this poem... 5/5! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    I liked how you repeated the first stanza! Amazing poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    This poem is by far one of my favorite dark poems. I love the repitition of that one stanza and since its such a powerful stanza it really makes this such a unique and great piece. Keep up the amazing work!

    ~jas~

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow. i love how this is more of a song, so i gave it my own little beat in my head, and wowowowowwowowow! this is amazing. 5/5