That was excellent, great work ur a very gud writter

Great poem Jules. I really loved your wording and how the things in nature are the only witnesses of what's going on in your life, and yet even they feel for you. Jpoet*

I usually don't enjoy repetitive poems, but yours was so tastefully done, it didn't matter.
I congratulate you on an excellent job.

Hey this is magnificent u word ur feelings so deep it captivates me this line "touched" me lol -the stars cry for my pain- good job

Wow. i love how this is more of a song, so i gave it my own little beat in my head, and wowowowowwowowow! this is amazing. 5/5

This poem is by far one of my favorite dark poems. I love the repitition of that one stanza and since its such a powerful stanza it really makes this such a unique and great piece. Keep up the amazing work!

~jas~

I liked how you repeated the first stanza! Amazing poem.

The depth of imagination you portray in this poem is more than amazing... I really like the flow of words and the description in this poem... 5/5! :)

WOW!!! im speechless this is beyond beautiful. very very amazing... 6/5