Comments : The Star in the Shadow of my Tomarrows

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    :] I liked it a lot. I gave a 5.
    Through thick
    and thin, in this
    presence of love
    I'm in, I know
    there's no place
    I'd rather be,
    than in your arms.

    ^ The ending is very lovely.

    N-G-C-S

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great poem. So sweet, heart-felt and meaningful. I loved your word usage and it has a very nice flow.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    You have a new man dave now..
    dang..someone is a pimp..lol
    Nice Poem
    Great job
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Corruption

    Wow amazing work uve done i got to say u r skilled good job im gonna read more i think im almost done lmao

    keenan