The imagery flow, and depth is stunning
BRAVO I want to vote twice so I can give it a ten

Very interesting... love the wording very nice

It is nice ..nice imagery..but I dont really know what this poem is about but I like it

It is nice ..nice imagery..but I dont really know what this poem is about but I like it

Wow, i really like your word choices here, you have done a great job

I really like this poem, you seem to have a very clear focus which you kept the entire way. You just have some verb tense problems, "Has" in the title should be have. Also "Cocoons crackles" should be crackle. These mistakes distract the reader from the poem a bit. In the second to last stanza, the last line seems a little misfit. Besides that, this is a very good poem.