Wow. I love this. It is so true.
I love the whole second paragraph the most. I can't wait to read more from you.

This poem will educate.... I teach job skills for the Mentally challenged... I notice the comparasion in careers from your profile... it is rewarding when they accomplish and meet goals..........

I love this one.. i love watching people too. body language fascinates me. congrats on a beautiful poem.

Parker

I like the ending of this and you used strong words in this. Put together this poem was very good and another 5/5 :)