I luv this poem..
Its awesome
great rhyme
detail
structure
Story Line
Great job
Congrats
on the contest also
5/5
~MF!

I like this alot. I love the concept and story behind it. The words you used to describe this girl and her life are used wonderfully. A great write. Keep it up. =] 5/5

OMG!!You are a great poet!!you are AMAZING!!!!i loved the concepted behind the poem!!!great use of words!! And thank you SO SO much for commenting on my poem!!
~Rachel~

"good is good, and bad is bad, but you dont know which one you had"

i dunno why. but this poem reminds me of that song by sheryl crow! well done! i'd just put in some commas if i were you, it would help put more emphasis on the emotion in the poem, but its still a good poem!

Narc xxx