Awww, nitin!!!
this is really great! I mean more than just great!
I love your idea and how we use our hearts....Oh I can totally relate =(

very great piece man...! very sweet of you to write such poem!
what else to say..oh thanks for every comment you've given me..I'm really grateful! & oh because of you ppl I'm improving my poetry everyday more than the previous!!!
thanks again!

I'm Travelling to Cairo Tomorrow and I guess You won't see me online much often!
so just in case you had a late comment from me...Plz try to understand that I'm busy with college!

Keep Your Excellent Work up!
Best Of Luck
Stay The Best (Y)
Luv
NemO x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x

Aww, amazing poem...! It really made me think about the meaning of love and what people may say about it, but i guess that till you find it you dont undertstand how that feels.Very beautifully written and great use use of words.Keep it up!5/5
Love,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Hey darl a very touching piece. lot of emotion very well written. keep it up xx

What I'll say about love is that it always has been and will always be a mystery... we tend to understand it yet,love has its own way of making us understand.

Nice poem youve got there.I like the theme much.

"for life is a simple riddle where rules are never clear"

Simple, yet touching.

A very tru poem with a wonderful ending....5/5 nice work :)

Nice words once again u've created a fabulous piece of art well done xox sam

Jeez your good!! I'm going to read all of your poems, and you can bet I'm going to comment on them! I dont have very many in here, but I have to wait until I find my other ones. but 5/5 from me!! Ohh I love the way you described how you love someone, and then when you lose them your willing to try love with someone new. Yeah that was really good especially comparing it to the rollercoaster!!
Hayley

This is a nice piece, the language you use is quite simple but I can see the deeper meaning underneath. :)

Ariana

Oh wow, you're doing great with this poem as I can see. This is simply a great poem. I absolutely love it. Your third stanza is just brilliant. Keep them coming.

Best Wishes
Michelle

Touched me soo deep..
very true... specially the last few lines..
life has rules that are never clear.. very well written..

nice job..

Much Love,
ipsita

Oh my... a thoughts that range the forest wild and fields both calm, serene, Art all that you have left, The lovely thought... would be always like the poets song.....beautiful penned...well done!

Wow this is so amazing. as i was reading i could completely relate. im speechless this is such a great poem
well done

sophie:)

p.s i would really appreciate it if u could comment on some of my poems.

Awesum write! u penned it so well yaar, no more words to comment on ur talent. u r always among my favs.
keep up the gud work.

luv

"they say, its like a ride in a rollercoaster
you cherish everything while going so high
but tears starts rolling when you come down
yet you don't mind giving it another try"

I agree with that completely.
Rollar coasters are fun but they can be terrifying... just like love =)
5/5 as always
*Gem*

I like this poem. Really enjoy reading your work!5/5