You are my...

by BeLLa   Sep 15, 2006


You are my stars in the night,
you are the sun that shines so bright,

You are my breaths that i take,
You are the icing on the cake

You are the milo to my milk,
you are the clothes to my silk.

You are the mountains to the sky,
You are the arms in which i lie

You are the heart to my gold,
You are the boy that got me sold

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jose Delapaz

    Beautiful well writen

  • 18 years ago

    by BeLLa

    Thanx for the comment but i was trying to put it like different things like icing to cake and clothes to silk..just stuff like that- sorta like that...anyway thanx for the comment

  • 18 years ago

    by GraCiE

    Its really good.. but i tihnk that the rhyming has taken over the poem and in some places its seems like the word has only been used so it will ryhme, and not for the meaning.
    but i think its a really good poem to build more on.. so keep up the excellent work!! x

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