Hay hay, ur finally on. Ill be keeping an eye on your work. im expecting great things :). excellent job with this one and i hope it does help....

My boyfriend just broke up with me, and i feel the same way! i hate this! i feel u!

Thanks for the message on my poem...... :)

This is a really deep poem.... i like it

Jochsey, i as a friend know that u have the courage and the strength to contiue to live. for i know that the person u r talking about will in the future find out and relize that u r a great guy and that u should put it behind u. great start and hope to read more!!