by elvenfire Sep 15, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
There was this one kid, i passed him by |
Wow...it really makes you question some of the things in it...like about the boy. But overall despite some of the probs from some of the vocab it was great. I liked how it presented this idea and kept it throughout. It was short but contained much. It was different than expected. |
by Audrey
Good poem, but it could use some editing (grammar/spelling etc..)Other than that I wouldnt change a thing. |