Two Hot Streams (Senryu)

by Ye Seul   Sep 15, 2006


Burning eyes drop tears
Quickly falling down my face
Until the heat fades

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  • 18 years ago

    by X2892

    Very good Senryu 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by sibyllene

    Oo, i like how the title fit so well to this poem, but wasn't too obvious. cool!

  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    So true,very peaceful, i liked this poem, but thought it was almost too good, i thought it had a clear meaning only i couldn't grasp it!